hey everyone!
I just have a revised storyline for my short film! I know the middle is kinda blaaa
but I need a little help on that so I anyone want's to put there 2 cents in your welcomed to do so well here it goes , I also put a script.
The blender and toaster are talking amongst themselves in the kitchen. Bob the fruit (does not have a proper name for it yet) run up them in a hurry saying a friend of his/hers are in trouble and he/she needs their help. Blender and Toaster look at each other, and then look at bob agreeing to help bob out. The Blender takes his cord so it can catches on opened window and whips it across the kitchen. The toaster grabs on to the cord and zip lines it across the kitchen to the window. The blender follows by swinging across the room to get the window. The Blender and Toaster jump on a tree branch next to the window and shimmy down the tree, running toward the end of the backyard where bob’s friend is in trouble. Blender gets the end of the backyard, toaster a little behind him. He stops right in front of a dog house. He looks up to see the brown bread on the roof of the doghouse. On top of the doghouse the brown bread has a butter knife help up against the white bread throat. The toaster catches up, and stops to look up what is going happening. The toaster starts to get an enraged expression on his face. Blender looks down at toaster with a look worried look on his face. The Blender takes his cord and throws it towards the brown bread. It hits the brown bread causing the brown and white bread to fall off the doghouse. The white bread lands in the toaster, they both start to blush. The brown bread lands in mud. Right after the brown bread lands, a seagull lands right beside him. The seagull starts nibbling on brown bread.The Blender, Toaster and white bread start laughing at him. As blender, toaster and white bread start walking off they hear brown bread say something. Brown bread yells to the toaster “don’t leave me, I’m your son!” As the Toaster turns around He has this surprised/ shock look on his face.
To be continued.........
script
Scene 1 Long shot
The Blender,and Toaster are talking amougst themself on the kitchen counter.
Scene 2 Medium long shot
Bob the fruit runs quickly towards Blender ,and Toaster.
Bob “Help me! A friend of mine is in trouble can you please help me!!”
Scene 3 Long shot
Blender looks at bob telling him that he will help him.
Blender “sure thing, we will help!”
Scene 4 medium close shot
Blender looks at Toaster, giving him a look that he know he will go along with blender to help. Toaster nods at Blender in agreement.
Scene 5 long shot
Blender take his cord out so it can catches on opened window and whips it across the kitchen.
Scene 6 long shot The camera follow the toaster
Toaster grabs on to the cord. Zip lines down to the window on the other end of the kitchen.
Scene 7 Medium long shot The camera also follows the blender
The blender follows by swinging across the room to get the window
Scene 8 medium long shot Pan with characters
The Blender and Toaster jump on a tree branch next to the window and shimmy down the tree, running toward the end of the backyard where bob’s friend is in trouble.
Scene 9 long shot
Blender gets the end of the backyard, toaster a little behind him. He stops right in front of a dog house.
Scene 10 close up
He looks up to see the brown bread on the roof of the doghouse
Scene medium long shot
On top of the doghouse the brown bread has a butter knife help up against the white bread throat.
Brown Bread “I thought you two would never show up. Here I was thinking it was going to be easy To have white bread all to myself. Haha!”
Scene 11 medium shot
The toaster catches up, and stops to look up what is going happening. The toaster starts to get an enraged expression on his face. Blender looks down at toaster with a look worried look on his face.
Toaster “let’s get him!”
Scene 12 medium long shot
The Blender takes his cord and throws it towards the brown bread
Scene 13 medium long shot
It hits the brown bread causing the brown and white bread to fall off the doghouse.
Scene14 medium shot
The white bread lands in the toaster, they both start to blush.
Scene 15 medium shot
The brown bread lands in mud. Right after the brown bread lands, a seagull lands right beside him. The seagull starts nibbling on brown bread.
Brown bread “ Hey, hey. Get out of here i’m not food!”
Scene 16 medium long shot
The Blender, Toaster and white bread start laughing at him
Scene17 Medium close up
As blender, toaster and white bread start walking off they hear brown bread say something. Brown bread yells to the toaster.
Brown Bread “ Hey! You cant let your son get eaten by a seagull! Come back!”
Scene 18 close up
As the Toaster turns around He has this surprised/ shock look on his face.
